So here it is, the fabled 8th draft of issue one PLUS the Epilogue.
Now for the most part this is tightening and minor tweaks to streamline the script.
There won't be a 9th draft at this point, well except for the Epilogue, that might have one or two more rewrites to it, but rather than wait here is it for your reading pleasures!
HEROIC Issue 1 - 8th draft with Epilogue
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For me, except for the Epilogiue, I am off to work on issue 2 now.